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    They watch over us as we grow
    Providing love and kindness in a harsh world
    Under their protection we learn
    How the world works
    How we work in the world
    Then time passes and the rolls may shift
    In their old age they need us to help them
    To use the very ideas they gave us
    We watch over them as they did for us
    Guiding them as they grow weak
    But even then they are still watching out for us
    Ensuring we have learned the lessons we needed to know
    And so the mantle is passed on
    Now we are the Caretakers



    Feel free to critique.



    I love it! Makes me think what happens next. Someone should illustrate this!

    BTW, Rakdos, if you want to be one of our site contributors I can set you up. Then you can submit to our official Storytelling page!

    You should have Wobbygongs, Obi, or F8tl do a reading of this and save it as a video/audio file. Rich media is key.. People don’t read as much these days, sadly. That’s why flash fiction is wonderful.



    That would be really cool. I’d love to submit on the Storytelling page.

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